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9/10
Quest for Diamonds in the Rough and Tough Neighborhood
WeatherViolet14 November 2009
This episode marks the most recent appearance to date of Sheila MacRae, the popular nightclub entertainer who began her film and television acting career in 1950. Raymond Serra has since passed.

Sheila MacRae Beth Howland, Laurence Luckinbill, John Bennett Perry and Neil Patrick Harris are some of the familiar guest stars who assist in a complex case reminiscent of a Dickensian saga, with intertwining sub-plots amid a backdrop of poor urban social and economic conditions, with a child fending for himself under dangerous circumstances.

It begins in Amsterdam, Netherlands, with Monica Evers' (Liz Vassey) smuggling diamonds into her New York City apartment building, near Eigers Market, at which she has overcharged upon her credit tab, and cannot afford to pay for additional purchases until she fences her contraband.

Young Tommy Remsen (Neil Patrick Harris), unaware of employer Ben Eigers' (Raymond Serra) mandate against Monica's additional credit, permits an additional charge on her account, to Ben's reprimanding Tommy.

Tommy is permitted to stay on as delivery clerk, against the wisdom of his widowed father, Dan Remsen (John Bennett Perry), who coaches swimming at the local gymnasium with natatorium in its basement. Dan maintains that Tommy ought to concentrate upon his practicing for an upcoming swimming tournament.

Often, we find the recurring themes of "widowed parent with child" throughout the course of this "MSW" series. Usually, a widowed mother has a young son, who becomes "the man of the house," and must protect his mother, who becomes a murder suspect. Or we frequently see a widowed father of a daughter, whose responsible suitor isn't good enough for her because she's all the family the father has, and the suitor often becomes a murder suspect, along with the woman's father. Or we see a wealthy widowed father, whose irresponsible children await their inheritance whether or not the father is murdered, but everyone becomes a suspect. Here, by way of variety, a widowed father and his responsible young son attempt to protect each other when bodies begin to show up, and each is hunted by perpetrators and authorities alike.

But there's more. Sandy Oates (Beth Howland), Monica's neighbor across the hall at the apartment building, cares for Monica's plants while she often disappears to smuggle diamonds into the country. Monica hasn't the sensitive approach to show her appreciation to Sandy, nor to those who break into her apartment in search of the hidden gems, such as Fred Turner (Joe Maruzzo), Vic Gorman (Kario Salem) or H. Van Houle (George Ede).

Meanwhile, Susan Wells (Sheila MacRae) prepares to cater a lavish banquet in the kitchen of the apartment of her good friend Jessica Fletcher (Angela Lansbury), who industriously creates her latest manuscript, amid, of course, several interruptions at every turn.

When Susan needs additional ingredients to provide for a recipe, she contacts Eigers Market, for Tommy Remsen to deliver the wares.

One one evening delivery run, Tommy stumbles across a body in a darkened passageway before an elevator, at which time the unrecognizable perpetrator fires a shot at him, a fact which is debated by authorities, Lieutenant Steve Warren (Laurence Luckinbill) and Detective Eddie Flowers (Clifton Powell), who investigate the murder, for which Tommy is its "Lone Witness."

But when Jessica receives the groceries for Susan, she discovers the bullet embedded within a sack of sugar, which buffered its trajectory, thereby to spare Tommy's very life.

And before Jessica finds the runaway Tommy to prove his innocence, someone chases him passed his father's protective reach into the gymnasium, at which another body is discovered in the pool.

Jessica must now uncover the source of the spoils which many are seeking, and then its hiding place, and then to assist Dan to protect Tommy if they are able to reach him before the perpetrator, whom Jessica must unmask, before the banquet is ready to be served.

An overall dark, treacherous episode, but also one containing hope and bright spots, sprinkled with friendly familiar faces and commendable acting by veteran stars and the "Lone Witness" alike.
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9/10
Jessica helps a young Neil Patrick Harris.
Sleepin_Dragon24 April 2023
Air hostess Monica is stepping on everyone's toes, owing money and swindling the wrong people. Monica is found dead, young shop worker Tommy is the only witness. Lieutenant Warren is on the case, he doesn't believe Tommy's story.

What a quality episode this is, it's original, it's different, it feels somehow very different to earlier episodes from the series. I liked the mystery, I loved the characters, it is great to see a young Neil Patrick Harris, even at this young age, he's the standout, I am so excited to see him in the new Doctor Who series.

Vic's silk suit, I think I'm in love, it's such a gaudy suit, I love it.

Poor Jessica, she finally gets round to doing some writing, and she's stuck with Susan, who has to be perhaps the most irritating person imaginable, if I were the killer, I'd have shot her instead of Monica. She clearly can't cook, I've never seen such a dreadful looking salad.

Quality episode, 9/10.
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8/10
Murder and diamond smuggling
TheLittleSongbird7 November 2017
Have always been quite fond of 'Murder She Wrote'. It is a fun and relaxing watch that makes you think as you try to unwind in the evening. If one wants more complex, twisty mysteries with lots of tension and suspense 'Murder She Wrote' may not be for you, but if you want something light-hearted and entertaining but still provide good mysteries 'Murder She Wrote' fits the bill just fine.

Of a wildly hit and miss season, one of the weakest ones for 'Murder She Wrote', "Lone Witness" is up there in the better half, if missing out on being one of the top 5 best. There is not much wrong at all with "Lone Witness". The only huge problem is that Sheila MacRae and her character are incredibly annoying and like they accidentally wandered out of a Woody Allen film (nothing against Woody Allen films, far from it, but the approach to the character and acting felt at odds with everything else here).

There are parts of the story too that veer on the slightly too complicated. A vast majority of the mystery however is hugely entertaining and absorbing, also really liked how unusually twisty it was for Season 9 and the criminal identity and the twist involving it was a very neat one.

Angela Lansbury shows once again why Jessica is one of her most famous roles. Neil Patrick Harris is a highly likable main suspect while there are classy turns from Beth Howland, Laurence Luckinbill and John Bennett Perry and an intense one from Joe Maruzzo.

Production values are slick and stylish. The music has energy and has presence but also not making the mistake of over-scoring, while it is hard to forget or resist the theme tune.

Writing is amiable and thought-provoking.

In summation, very well done. 8/10 Bethany Cox
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6/10
Good concept, which didn't quite work
martin-intercultural21 September 2017
This tale is framed in a home-away-from-home setting: One of the Cabot Cove neighbors is staying with Jessica in her Manhattan pied-à-terre while preparing a grand dinner that may lead to a cookbook publishing deal. So far, so good: Except the gal pal turns out so whiny and neurotic, we the viewers will vow never to do a favor for a friend again, as long as we live. (The character is just poorly written, morphing from village grandma in one scene to Coco Chanel in the next.) We also keep wondering how on earth Jessica puts up with it, all the while chasing her own book deadline. After all, back in Cabot Cove we have seen her politely yet firmly throw people out of her house for much lesser transgressions. The crime investigation is solid as ever. But the klutzy friend's presence is simply vexing throughout; it adds neither humor nor substance to the story.
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7/10
Lone witness
coltras3525 May 2022
A delivery boy witnesses a murder and finds himself accused of the crime - but Jessica resolves to prove his innocence. A lively and enjoyable entry that keeps one watching, especially to see how Jessica going to prove the boy innocent. Here, she shows her compassion and sympathy for a kid who wants to be a writer. His father doesn't understand his sons hobby, but slowly he comes to accept it.
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7/10
The cook, the diamond smuggler, Doogie Houser and the cop
safenoe30 September 2017
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Interestingly, there's been IMDb user interest in this episode, with two reviews being posted in September 2017, and now mine.

Great to see Neil Patrick Harris in this episode (this was before he came out), and Jessica seeks to protect him. Also the visiting cook to Jessica is on her feet the whole episode! I think Murder, She Wrote is a cultural product of the Reagan-Bush era, with Diagnosis Murder a product of the subsequent Clinton era.
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5/10
Ultra Hokey
xbatgirl-300298 September 2022
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MSW has a certain style that worked great if the stories were set in Cabot Cove or other quaint settings. It fails completely when set in New York City. The location is not remotely believable as a gritty, big, diverse city. This episode especially feels dated, and I don't mean the nineties. More like the 1950s. Or at least it feels like Hollywood's mid-century, Leave It To Beaver version of the world.

The biggest problem is that it has not one super anxious, neurotic character, but two - Jessica's friend trying to get a cookbook deal and Beth Howland (Vera from the show Alice, basically playing Vera) as the victim's overly intrusive neighbor. They get on your nerves right away. What a bad writing, and maybe casting, choice. I agree with another review here that the Jessica from the rest of the series would never be so tolerant of the chaos in her kitchen while she is trying to write. About the third time Jessica's friend starts melting down about not getting the proper ingredients delivered to her, I was done. Go get your own groceries, lady, and be quiet.

Then the murder happens but the body disappears. Here is the problem with the cozy lack of blood on MSW. We're expected to believe there was a shooting but not a single bit of evidence was left for the cops? And nothing against the actors but they were completely miscast as believable NY detectives. Again, if this was a small town, it would be easier to suspend disbelief.

Luckily, higher points include the more authentic actor playing the building manager who manages to rise above the hokey script and the father/son pair of Neil Patrick Harris and Chandler's dad, John Bennett Perry. The father starts out strict and cold but Perry manages to show how he slowly gets a clue, even showing it non-verbally when it's not in the script. This helps us believe he really did care all along about his son but was just slow to open up to him. Coincidentally, the victim's name is Monica.

In the end, we find out why one detective was so bad at his job, even though it comes out of left field. The delivery of the confession speech actually made me laugh.

This episode is mainly worth watching for Harris back when he was the age of Doogie Houser.
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1/10
"No offense...but this is really terrible writing!"
planktonrules24 July 2023
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As I watched "Lone Witness", I found myself very frustrated thanks to some VERY bad writing. Fortunately, my feelings were confirmed when my daughter blurted out "No offense...but this is really terrible writing!". I couldn't have said it any better myself.

Tommy (Neil Patrick Harris) is a delivery boy who knows Jessica. One day, Tommy sees a man hunching over a dead woman...and the guy takes a shot at Tommy! Of course, Tommy contacts the police and it's a shame, as the detective running the case is suffering from a serious case of stupidity or inconsistency.

Why do I say the detective was probably so stupid? Well, almost immediately after Tommy reports the killing, the cops and Tommy return to the scene and when the body is gone, the cop immediately insists Tommy lied about everything. Even when Jessica later finds the bullet shot at Tommy, the cop insists Tommy is guilty of lying. Later, when they find the dead woman, the cop then insists that Tommy must have killed her!! There's plenty more....and each time the cop insists Tommy is evil, you can't help but think the cop is dirty or stupid. In either case, this is bad writing.

Another example of very bad writing is when Tommy is seen running from the guy who he thinks is the killer. Tommy's dad SEES this...and does nothing. Either his father hates him and wishes Tommy was dead OR this is just bad writing.

Overall, this is a frustratingly bad episode thanks to bad writing. It's a shame, as I generally like the show...but this and a few other stinkers from season 9 are incredibly frustrating.
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5/10
Script cluttered with too many characters
FlushingCaps11 April 2023
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The script for this episode was much-cluttered with characters who added nothing to the plot or to the viewers' enjoyment of the show. The important parts were quite decent. If this were a novel, I'd say trimming it from 450 pages to 330 would improve it by about 33%.

We begin in Amsterdam, the Netherlands where a flight attendant is selling some diamonds to someone, who complains about the number she has being much smaller than he expected. He pays her, but not in American dollars as expected, saying it's hard to get those right now. We follow her further back in the U. S., learning her name is Monica, and that she lives near Jessica's NY apartment.

Monica has a neighbor who waters her plants when she is gone, and she also has a bookie to whom she is in debt (later stated to be "12 large ones-meaning 12 grand") and she also owes the neighborhood grocery store over $300 for her store charge account.

Now I thought this minor point very odd. The store owner reluctantly brings up how much she owes him as she has a sack full of groceries and is all set to leave, sounding as though he has not been pushing her at all for the money. If he was going to cut her off that day, he should have stopped her before she had a bag full of groceries ready to take home.

She tells him she can pay him tomorrow. He says today, or he will cut off her credit. That part would have worked if he had said to her something like, "Monica, you have been putting me off for four weeks now on your bill. I simply cannot extend anymore credit to you until you pay off what you owe."

Instead, she goes to the counter and tells the young clerk that she'll pay with a check, but opens her checkbook to "discover" that she doesn't have any with her. She takes the groceries, telling the approving clerk that "she'll be right back (with a check). The owner is now upset with the clerk, but she had a standing credit with the store and letting her come right back is the way my local grocery store would handle a steady customer today, so I can certainly believe that part, even though it is New York City.

The clerk is also a delivery boy, Tommy, played by Neil Patrick Harris. He is about to take a delivery to Jessica's apartment and is directed by his employer to stop at Monica's to get his payment first. Wouldn't it make more sense to make his delivery and then go for the payment, instead of lugging the big box of groceries around to Monica's?

It got confusing when we see Tommy inside Monica's apartment building-I don't know who buzzed him in, but instead of going to her apartment, he instead appears to be entering the laundry room where he stumbles upon Monica's apparent body on the floor with a man kneeling over her. The man looks up and stares at the boy before a shot is fired. Tommy drops the box and runs away, without apparently being chased at all.

We have additional scenes detailing Tommy's struggles with his father, who is also his coach on the high school swimming team, who doesn't believe Tommy is just "friends" with Monica, someone he frequently delivers groceries to-he thinks his son has a "crush" on her. He doesn't think it wise for Tommy to waste so much time writing stories, at one point claiming nobody gives scholarships for college because nobody fills an arena to watch someone write stories.

HUH? First-there are tons of scholarships for all sorts of things beyond sports, including such academic things as writing. Second-college swimming teams do not come close to drawing enough fans to pay for scholarships. Universities are very lucky if two (football and men's basketball) draw enough fans and bring in enough TV revenue to pay for their costs. The rest of the usual two dozen or more sports the schools sponsor are paid for either from their football revenues or from the school's general funds. Even the sports that draw decent numbers-such as baseball and hockey-do not draw enough fans to pay for themselves.

The plant watering neighbor seemed rather annoying and didn't seem to add anything to the story. More so, another featured character was "Susan" a Cabot Cove neighbor of Jessica's who was staying with her in New York because she is to prepare a fancy meal for a publisher and others to hopefully be able to arrange for a cook book to be published. Throughout the roughly two-day adventure connected with the murder Susan is always cooking, complaining about how nervous she is, and totally interrupting Jessica with every little food-prep mishap you can think of, while Jessica is trying desperately to write. Jessica has to pick up the phone to order-from that same grocery store-everything her Maine friend needs for her big dinner. Susan never really played a key role unless there was some intent to annoy us.

Another thing that made no sense involved one of the murder facts. After spotting the body and dropping Jessica's box of groceries and running away, Tommy raced to Jessica's apartment to tell her what he saw. She immediately phoned the police from the lobby-I guess she happened to be there when he raced in-there was no doorman on duty at the time. They go with the cops to where Tommy saw the body and find only the box of groceries he dropped. No blood, no body. Much later the detective tells Jessica he thinks the boy was lying, possibly because he dropped the box and broke items and didn't want to pay for them. He reports that they couldn't find any bullet in the area where he was when he says he was shot at.

But much later in the show, Jessica finds a bullet in a bag of sugar that was part of the groceries. That box was right on the floor when police began searching and since it was in the youth's arms when the shot was fired, it seems impossible the police wouldn't have found a big bullet hole in the box and then where the bullet wound up. Frankly, I would have expected Jessica to observe the bullet hole in the box when she and Tommy arrived at the scene with the police.

One reviewer states that Monica lived IN Jessica's apartment, (the show was not totally clear) but if so, it seems odd that the building manager seen later would be introducing himself to Jessica, who didn't seem to know him, nor he her.

We do finish with the killer, one who should know better, totally opening up to reveal all despite having only a couple of rather weak pieces of evidence presented. Killers confessing everything is an on-going weakness of this series, necessary because frequently all Jessica has is a couple of weak bits of evidence to suggest their guilt, likely not nearly enough to convict.

I also think the diamond smugglers are handling their business in a bizarre way. They give their courier-the flight attendant-an unspecified amount of gems to take overseas. She takes them to the dealer, who pays for the amount given and they trust her when she says this amount is all she got? I would think the supplier would have communicated with the European contact, "I have 25 gems and expect, say, $100,000 for them." Monica is just the delivery person. Instead, she takes out, say, 5 of the gems and gets only $80,000 and her employer is going to trust her?

It wasn't a terrible story, but they tried to do too much and had too many things going on that didn't make much sense. I give it a 5.
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1/10
Too Annoying and Ridiculous
zombiemockingbird7 April 2022
Every character in this episode is annoying and so is the story. The ridiculously ditzy neighbor staying with Jessica doing a cookbook and the victim's nasal-voiced intrusive neighbor are both overly irritating and pointless; they add NOTHING to the story. The sappy, father-son conflict relationship is silly, and the final villain reveal is so totally out of left field it made me laugh. Skip this one.
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5/10
A nice sideline
bkoganbing12 September 2017
Jessica Fletcher is in her New York apartment and I wonder what her rent is and takes an interest in young Neil Patrick Harris who works as a delivery boy for the local grocer, is on the high school swim team with his father as coach, and has ambitions to be a writer. He's also got stewardess Liz Vassey who has an apartment in Jessica's building.

Vassey has a fine additional sideline doing a little diamond smuggling. And she has a few confederates on this side of the pond. When she's suspected of holding out, she's killed and Harris happens to come upon the deed freshly done.

Now there are a whole lot of nasty people looking for him as are the cops in this case Detective Laurence Luckinbill. Angela Lansbury's challenge is to sort it out and figure out who are the bad guys as another of Vassey's confederates is killed with the body in the high school pool.

Was Neil Patrick Harris ever that innocent?
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No politics please
harveytory3 June 2021
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I read goofs first and hunt them down while watching the episode. This episode had the strangest goof and it was repetitive. In the scene when the lieutenant was discussing the diamonds with Fletcher there were shadows moving behind and over *his* right shoulder. The scene would change to Fletcher or the other detective, come back to the lieutenant and shadows continue moving behind him. Completely pulls the viewer out of their enjoyment of the episode.

Also, I've retreated away from politics and news during 2021 and appreciate everyone dropping politics at the door before entering any comments in IMDb.
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