I found it interesting that Kellin attempted to rekindled a love that was forgotten by Chakotay and succeeds and then when Kellin loses her memory Chakotay tries for 5 minutes and gives up.
This is fertile ground for an episode of star trek but I think that this episode required some restructuring. Perhaps we the viewer get to see the romance bloom between Chakotay and Kellin and thereby the impact of memory loss is heightened? I suppose the constraints of a 45 minute episode does limit the possibilities for the writers of the episode.
It is an interesting plot to an episode ----- Attempting to convince someone you had been in love with each other and they have no recollection of it.
The execution of this episode did not work for me. I did not feel tension or suspense in this episode and because I did not see how the relationship between Chakotay and Kellin developed I found myself not emotionally invested in the lost love story arc.
This is fertile ground for an episode of star trek but I think that this episode required some restructuring. Perhaps we the viewer get to see the romance bloom between Chakotay and Kellin and thereby the impact of memory loss is heightened? I suppose the constraints of a 45 minute episode does limit the possibilities for the writers of the episode.
It is an interesting plot to an episode ----- Attempting to convince someone you had been in love with each other and they have no recollection of it.
The execution of this episode did not work for me. I did not feel tension or suspense in this episode and because I did not see how the relationship between Chakotay and Kellin developed I found myself not emotionally invested in the lost love story arc.