This being a "student piece", I'm not judging it overly harshly. Given the context, it's a solid work. Say what you will about the sound effects, etc., the overall package is disturbing and disorienting, and this shows the makings of a good horror director.
The short is somewhat couched in horror clichés: jerky movements, quick cuts, loud sound effects (much of which is static, which seems incongruous with the setting)... the use of sound might overpower the overall work a bit. What's more, once all is said and done, it's not really clear what happened, beyond that it was disturbing.
Still and all, this piece shows a lot of promise.
The short is somewhat couched in horror clichés: jerky movements, quick cuts, loud sound effects (much of which is static, which seems incongruous with the setting)... the use of sound might overpower the overall work a bit. What's more, once all is said and done, it's not really clear what happened, beyond that it was disturbing.
Still and all, this piece shows a lot of promise.