Well acted, and generally well written. Only two problems; first, I figured out what was going on in the first 5 minutes. Second, one thing stretched my suspension of disbelief a bit.
I understand that it's an established character trait for Sam to sometimes be a little naive, but really? You already suspect the guy, or at least Dean does, for good reason, and you just doofistically tells him that he's found the bad guys' van in the back?
And when Dean's trying to convince the Scoobies that the vampire they killed wasn't the one who killed wassername's family, why did he not throw in that he had proof that he'd been human a month before? A little more impressive maybe than "he wouldn't lie"?
At first I thought Victor's attempt to get them to go along after they knew he'd killed their families was too ridiculous, then I remembered that he was crazy, so that gets a pass.
I understand that it's an established character trait for Sam to sometimes be a little naive, but really? You already suspect the guy, or at least Dean does, for good reason, and you just doofistically tells him that he's found the bad guys' van in the back?
And when Dean's trying to convince the Scoobies that the vampire they killed wasn't the one who killed wassername's family, why did he not throw in that he had proof that he'd been human a month before? A little more impressive maybe than "he wouldn't lie"?
At first I thought Victor's attempt to get them to go along after they knew he'd killed their families was too ridiculous, then I remembered that he was crazy, so that gets a pass.