Beginning was amazing, raunchy jokes, interesting idea
but it all falls down quickly when main hero starts do 'moral' things; jokes quickly ends;
and then plot deteriorates rapidly, everything that screenwriters didn't thought thru, every illogical thing starting hurting me;
hero becomes messiah; script goes to hell; everything becomes plain stupid, no jokes just "i wanna marry a girl and get dying mother happy"...
You have 2 sit down and think whole screenplay from perspective that humans can't lie
& that is a life-changing thing. Life as you know is gone - you have 2 sit down & think everything through 2 make it real, logical, believable, firm, make exciting story (& don't forget about funny jokes throughout whole movie not just appetizer-beginning).
They didn't do that
So idea is cool but realization is meh. It will be good for a short stand-up comedy, but jokes alone not enough
4 flick screenplay, as i said, you have 2 sit down and think EVERYTHIN' through. No compromises
Thanks 4 Elvis Costello - Sitting doe, i really like this song
"The world's gonna end unless we have sex Right NOW" - is my new pick up phrase that i use on my girlfriend 4 fun. Great little inside joke.
but it all falls down quickly when main hero starts do 'moral' things; jokes quickly ends;
and then plot deteriorates rapidly, everything that screenwriters didn't thought thru, every illogical thing starting hurting me;
hero becomes messiah; script goes to hell; everything becomes plain stupid, no jokes just "i wanna marry a girl and get dying mother happy"...
You have 2 sit down and think whole screenplay from perspective that humans can't lie
& that is a life-changing thing. Life as you know is gone - you have 2 sit down & think everything through 2 make it real, logical, believable, firm, make exciting story (& don't forget about funny jokes throughout whole movie not just appetizer-beginning).
They didn't do that
So idea is cool but realization is meh. It will be good for a short stand-up comedy, but jokes alone not enough
4 flick screenplay, as i said, you have 2 sit down and think EVERYTHIN' through. No compromises
Thanks 4 Elvis Costello - Sitting doe, i really like this song
"The world's gonna end unless we have sex Right NOW" - is my new pick up phrase that i use on my girlfriend 4 fun. Great little inside joke.
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