I like the first half of this film very much. The acting was realistic and convincing, and some of the mannerisms of the characters felt accurate. But (SPOILER ALERT), after the 'climax' scene, the film still keeps going and going and going... with a repeating gag that just wasn't funny. I felt that a better twist would've done this idea more justice, as it really is a pretty good idea for a film. It's just that it's half realized; the writer seems to have run out of inspiration, and left of watching a series of scenes after the climax that really went nowhere. Overall, a good effort, but somewhat of a missed opportunity for greatness.
Review of Hold the Mayo
