The story is about the longing one character has for the other. He gets strung on and has trouble letting go.
The plot, especially with the French part. It doesn't make any sense. How did the Chinese guy get a visa so quickly? Doesn't really add up.
The rest of it isn't too bad.
The part I dislike was the French part, especially the focus on their money and spending, which is sadly too common.
The full story is good, but if you have trouble understanding it, it might get a little boring+odd.
