The set-up isn't bad. That said, coming up with a decent premise that isn't the least bit creative or inventive, isn't saying much. The 2nd Act fizzles out almost immediately, followed by an ending that clearly wasn't well thought out. Hollywood is full of writer/directors who can neither write, nor direct. I hear they are looking for a script based "solely in a bar." Hopefully, the finished project is screened in a bar... you will likely want to be drunk.
Review of Writer's Block
